Thursday, 21 August 2014

All's Fair in Love and War

So, I had to write a short story for English at school... It's terribly cliche, and I apologise, but here you go.

All’s Fair in Love and War
My sputtering tallow candle cast an uncertain light over the letter clutched in my hand. Guilt gnawed distantly at my insides as I held the paper before me, but I pushed it away. Tilting my candle so as to dispel the shadows that crept onto the page, I brushed all other thoughts aside, and began to read the letter that was not mine.

Dearest Tristan,
I thank God for every letter I receive from you – nothing is of more relief than the assurance that you may yet return to me. How are the men? There has been no word here for a long time. Your letters are, of late, the only news I have, and renew my constant hope that the day draws nearer that I shall see you again, brave soldier – alive and well, and safe on our home shores once more.

Laurel’s words sprung from the page and danced through the shadows around me, bringing them to life. If I closed my eyes, I could see her; touch her; hold her. I could taste her lips, tempered with the bittersweet memory of that one stolen kiss… For a brief moment, I could almost imagine she was writing to me.

I could never forgive Tristan for sweeping Laurel off her feet right before my eyes. Every time I saw her slender frame wrapped in his arms, radiating with that perfect, inexplicable light, I burned with jealousy. She was breathtaking; the fulfilment of my deepest dreams and desires. And she was his.

My mind suddenly wandered, unbidden, to last night – the night I waved Tristan goodbye. We both knew it would be a dangerous patrol. It would risk exposure during the day – exposure to both the relentless, unforgiving expanses of endless sand and sunburnt stone, and to equally relentless, unforgiving enemy fire. But there were no alternatives. Lives would be lost, I knew, but a good leader knows when to sacrifice a few for the good of many. Laurel told me that, once – via Tristan, in one of her letters. It stung bitterly that she wouldn’t write to me personally. Often, at night, with nothing to keep the shadows at bay, my darkest, most twisted thoughts crept from their lairs and overtook my body with envy. ‘If only’, they taunted, their voices sickly sweet, ‘If only Tristan was out of your way’…

At this, I shook my head violently, shaking myself into the present, and re-immersed myself in Laurel’s words.

All is well at home, save for your absence. Ma is recovering steadily from her fall – praise the Lord! Winter has come – it is bitterly cold – but my job holds steady, and should until at least next year. My nightmares have not ceased – I dream more often of your death than I do of your return – but my sister is always here to comfort me, and to remind me that upon your return, you and I shall be married. Married – it is still the sweetest and strangest thing to say!

Her words jolted through me, snapping me back to the hellish reality in which I existed. The light that had burned inside me as I read her words was extinguished as my mind registered the truth: I was here, in the dark, alone. And she would never be mine…

My candle flickered listlessly, barely keeping the dark at bay. Again, I couldn’t help but think back to last night. I had gazed at the unforgiving, endless sand, its menace untamed by the shadows of night, and fixed my sights on the five figures slinking away, soon to be engulfed by darkness. I recalled my sense of triumph as the silhouette on the left turned to wave at me, before he melded into the gloom. Right now, I couldn’t help but feel uneasy at the memory.

A drop of wax fell from my feeble stub onto the letter like a single teardrop, calling me back to the present. The darkness crept further, licking hungrily at the corners of the letter, my waning candle struggling to repel it. Tristan’s silhouette flickered in and out of the shadows that never faded from the corners of my consciousness.

I took a deep breath to steady myself, bidding my hands to stop shaking, and glanced back to the letter. The words tumbled over themselves before my eyes, nonsensical and incomprehensible as the molten streaks that ran down the side of my tallow candle, and of the next few paragraphs I took in very little. So it was, that when I reached the final passage, I found myself reading it over a further three times before understanding finally dawned.

Brave soldier, before I post this letter, there is one final piece of news which I must impart. I pray that it does not change your feelings for me, or your hopes for our future. I am six months pregnant with your child. I ought to have told you sooner, I know, but please forgive me – I was scared. I can put it off no longer. I must share my secret joy in hopes it will sustain you too, and see us both through this terrible war. We both knew we were rash, that night before you left, and we have not been proven wrong. I do not regret it, though. I hope the child has your eyes.

“Oh God”.

Only now did my actions of last night fall piece by piece into their terrible place. I had – fully knowingly – sent my best friend to his grave. And for what? It made me sick to my stomach to think of it. Was it on my conscience that he would now never see his child? I found myself hoping, with all my heart, that I should see him again, alive and well – for not only my sake, but for that of Laurel and her unborn child.

“Oh God”. What had I done?

It was then that the messenger arrived. He stood, panting, filthy, and exhausted, in the struggling light of my weakening candle stub. “The patrol”, he gasped. My head snapped up.

“Yes?” I demanded. “What of them?”

He hesitated, seemingly unsure of how to proceed.

“Go on”.

“We lost them all, Corporal. Encountered enemy fire at sunrise. They stood no chance”.


I dropped the candle and it clattered to the ground, its flame instantly extinguished in the godforsaken sand. My world spun before me; my ears filled with unuttered screams and the harsh assault of gunfire. I swore I heard a newborn’s cry as the shadows rushed forward, uninhibited now, and engulfed me. 

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